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Trial 1:Invisability
By Invsabella

(The scene cuts to everyone standing outside in a forest at night.)

Marshall Lee: Okay, guys, the first phase of vampire orientation is learning... (Catches a firefly and puts it in his mouth.) ...invisibility. (he turns invisible and creeps toward Fionna and grabs her, chuckles nervously)

Fionna: (nervous chuckle) Gross dude

Marshall Lee: Pinch!

Fionna: Ouch hey! (Fionna slaps Marshall Lee)

Marshall Lee: (He catches her before she hits the ground. Marshall lee moves Fionna around and grabs her wrists. As he becomes visible once again.)

Marshall Lee: You ready for the power of...invisibility?

Fionna: (Sarcastically) With all my heart.(Laughs)

Marshall Lee: Good

(Marshall lee sends Fionna spinning around until she stops and her legs wobble, feeling dizzy.)

Marshall Lee: Give it a whirl, Cake! (Then he sends Cake spinning until she falls to the ground.) Now close your eyes clear you mind and concentrate on nothing! Before you know it you’ll be invisible.

Cake: (Cake stands up and crosses her arms) How am I supposed to concentrate on nothing?

Marshall Lee: Don’t be a crab apple, just do it.

Cake: Nah I’ll just sit this one out.

Marshall lee: Pfft, What a pussy cat.

Fionna: (Fionna Closes her eyes really hard and turns invisible) Woah what?(Fionna looks at her hand)

Cake: (Gasps) Fionna!

Fionna: I’m invisible? I'm Invisible!

(Fionna visibility flickers in and out until she becomes fully visible again and her bite wounds heal instantaneously)

Marshall lee: Oh Glob, it wore off already? (Cake glares at Marshall lee) Uhh I mean Lookin good fionna or you would be If I could see you (Nervous laugh)

Cake: Mhm, Then Why can I still see her?

Marshall lee: Because you guys become vampires at the same time. So you are forever linked.

Cake: But-

Fionna: AWW COOL! (Fionna picks up cake and hugs her tight.)

Fionna: (walks up to Marshall Lee)

Marshall Lee: (Nervously) Oh there you are!

Fionna: I gotta admit Marshall, I didn’t really trust you at first and I kinda thought you were a jerk but your pretty cool you know that?

Marshall lee: Uhh(wipes sweat off face, Nervous laughter)

Fionna: (Giggle) now I wouldn’t mind spending eternity with you (Fionna's eyes sparkle and Marshall lee’s eyes sparkle)…And cake too of course.

(Cake hisses and scratches at Marshall lee and jumps out of fionnas arms and runs away)

Fionna: Woah Cake what’s your deal? (Fionna runs after her)

Beebee: (laughs) Marshall lee...your friends are some real airheads. (Gabby and Wally grimace.)

(Fionna and Cake happen upon a place deep in the woods where Lumpy Space Prince camping out.)

Lumpy Space Prince: Oh, my glob, Melvin. Ever since Clark started eating meat, his abs looks so good. I mean, its not like I was checking him out or nothin’, but like, but you know what I mean...Im still way hotter.

Cake: Wow! LSP's a hobo? I wonder how he pays his phone bill.

Fionna: Forget that, Let's mess with him.

Cake: Fionna Wait!

Lumpy Space Prince: I'm doing so awesome on my own. Like, right now, I found this can of Beets.

(Fionna starts making moaning sounds, while picking up some of LSP's camping supplies.)

Lumpy Space Prince: Fionna? Put down my stuff!

(Cake hides out from behind a bush)

Cake: Fionna he knows it's you!

Fionna: He must recognize my voice. Ill disguise it (Romanian accent) I’m invisible!
(Fionna continue to mess around the campsite.)

Lumpy Space Prince: Melvin, I have to go. She got into my toilet paper. Melvin, I have to go! (hangs up)

(Marshall lee, Gabby, Wally, and Beebee are all watching close by. They start to snicker as they do. LSP starts chasing her.)

Lumpy Space Prince: Give it back!

Fionna: Weeeee!

(She lets loose a roll of toilet paper, and it wraps around Fionna's eyes, blindfolding her.)

Fionna: Ah wait I cant see!

(Because Fionnas is blindfolded, she can't see where she's going, and her foot unintentionally knocks into the can of sliced beets.)

Lumpy Space Prince: (in slow motion) Nooooooooo!

(Time seems to pass in slow motion as the sliced beets spill all over the ground.)

Lumpy Space Prince: MY BEETS!! (Angrily, he hits at Fionna but fionna doges, Gabby, Wally, and Beebee laugh at the sight.)

Beebee: Time to join in on the fun!

Lumpy Space Prince: You ruined everything! I'm gonna kill you!

Fionna: Sorry Relax Lsp I was just messing around. Ill clean it up see. (An axe suddenly appears to float in midair. LSP suddenly gasps and faints at the sight.)

Cake: (Walks up to fionna and takes the toilet paper off her head)

Fionna: Geez, i really scared him.

(Fionna and cake gasp as Marshall lee appears behind them.)

Marshall lee: Sick vampire scare, girls.

Fionna: Thanks.


To Be continued...
Previous: [link]
Next: Trail 2:Toughness [link]

If you might need to start form the beginning ([link]

Well here ya go chapter 3! But its not over of course. Chapter 4 will be posted soon if enough people Favorite it(That way ik if its good enough to keep going) so I hope you like it!

Warning: Moderate Fiolee content(if you consider eye gazing and flirtatious pinching fiolee haha)

Original transcript: [link]
Watch it here: [link]
base image: [link]
See the image better here: [link]
Fionna - Finn
Cake - Jake
Marshall lee – Marceline
Wally - Wendy
Beebee - Booboo
Gabby – Gerogy
Melvin- Melissa
Lumpy Space prince- Lumpy space princess
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vevulicious379 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Do you do the drawings at the top yourself?
invisabella Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
no i use these things called bases. which is this one [link]. then i draw over them and color them. i just think they spice up the text better and give you a better visual setting.
vevulicious379 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ah. Thank you so much for Favouriting my Fiolee story. I've got a bunch of other sh*t, so check it out, including much more Fiolee.
ccfirebloom Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh, I HAVE to see how this whole thing ends!
LlikeOaVsinE Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awesome >w<
invisabella Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
KawaiiOutaku Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013   Traditional Artist
invisabella Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you
KawaiiOutaku Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013   Traditional Artist
KATKATROCKS Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student Writer
invisabella Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
i'm assuming thats positive so thanks
Cocoismynumber1food Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Impressive faking Marshall
invisabella Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thanks i think :)
Cocoismynumber1food Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome ^~^
Drawing-Heart Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
awesome :3 when is the next one?
invisabella Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
probably like a day or 2. or when i get a good target goal of favorites
Drawing-Heart Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
Oh ok, I like the part when she says she doese not mind spending the ertenety with him.... <3
invisabella Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013  Student Digital Artist
haha yeah i thought that was kinds sweet i couldnt help myself.
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